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Hi..

I did a page for Deadly Temptation and would like some feedback. The address is http://on.to/deadly

Thanks
Parmenian

I don't like the way that the Rules are the first thing you see. I would prefer a storyline to draw me in, rather than a bunch of rules to make me back off.

You have two navigation systems at the same time.

"Clans" on your sword actually only brings up the first clan, not a choice of clans.

There are errors on the pages (according to IE5).

Kas.

Didn't take a full in-depth look, but:

The splash is pretty nice, however, you might consider placing margin on the sides, the text would be more comfortable to read -this is just a personal preference, though. Scale the text down a point or two and give it a nice border, maybe?

As Kas pointed out, you have two nav systems, and although I do see the point of having the 'most used' links separate, it's not really necessary. Here, too, you might consider squeezing the margins a bit wider.

On a more general note, you might want to think about giving up frames at some point -usually the sooner the better.

Anyhow, overall a rather nice site, nothing major that'd strike one's eye. Even the fonts are legible:)

E

PS. Kas, IE 5 IS an error.

agree with kastagaar, I'd completely lose your splash page, make that the content where rules currently loads, and make rules a link on the left. Also agree about the nav system, you seem to have 3 in different styles.

That said, obviously the content is all there so it wouldn't take a huge amount of work to clean it all up a bit and make it consistent. And put it on a doman name not http://go.to yadda yadda, I believe search engines etc refuse to register URLs on that...